Why I like America – Student Compositions

Student compositions

Student compositions

Walking down the school hallway this week, a new bulletin board display caught my attention. Mrs. DeLalla’s Third and Fourth Grade students had written patriotic paragraphs (February 2009). The children’s outlook was so dear; I thought you might enjoy these paragraphs, too.

I love America because it has the greatest stores and the best schools. I live in New Hampshire and it has the best sliding hills ever, not like Kansas which has tons of tornadoes.

I love America because it has the greatest stores and the best schools. I live in New Hampshire and it has the best sliding hills ever, not like Kansas where it has tons of tornadoes.

 I am glad to be an American because you can do things without the government pushing in. I know it is a good country because you can practice your own religion freely. I love America.

I am glad to be an American because you can do things without the government pushing in. I know it is a good country because you can practice your own religion freely. I love America.

 America is the best country because there is healthy food and very warm clothes. My favorite thing in America is our town of Richmond. This little town has a good Catholic school and nice Sisters. This is why America is the best country ever. I like America. Do you?

America is the best country because there is healthy food and very warm clothes. My favorite thing in America is our town of Richmond. This little town has a good Catholic school and nice Sisters. This is why America is the best country ever. I like America. Do you?

Today I'm going to write about my own country, America. I think it's nice to live here because it has a nice school and a very nice little town called Richmond, where I live. I love America although it isn't perfect. But I will always be happy to be an American.

Today I'm going to write about my own country, America. I think it's nice to live here because it has a nice school and a very nice little town called Richmond, where I live. I love America although it isn't perfect. But I will always be happy to be an American.

I am glad to be an American because we are free. And it is a mighty, good, and caring nation. As a good nation, we help people who are in need. I like all the stores and neat places around us such as parks, skyscrapers, factories and etc. I love my country because of the nice smell of mead and the hills flourishing in green. The nice blue sky and sun so bright and beautiful make me feel good. It is the best country in the world.

I am glad to be an American because we are free. And it is a mighty, good, and caring nation. As a good nation, we help people who are in need. I like all the stores and neat places around us such as parks, skyscrapers, factories and etc. I love my country because of the nice smell of meadows and the hills flourishing in green. The nice blue sky and sun so bright and beautiful make me feel good. It is the best country in the world.

I like America because it has more freedom. It is not ruled by a king like England. It has nice houses and valleys. It has the best mountains in the world. That is why I like America.

I like America because it has more freedom. It is not ruled by a king like England. It has nice houses and valleys. It has the best mountains in the world. That is why I like America.

I am proud to be an American because we have good schools and are able to get a great education. Our military has happy strong soldiers to fight for the rights of our freedom. We have good homes in our towns and cities. These are just a few of many reasons why I am proud to be an American.

I am proud to be an American because we have good schools and are able to get a great education. Our military has happy strong soldiers to fight for the rights of our freedom. We have good homes in our towns and cities. These are just a few of many reasons why I am proud to be an American.

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  1. Sister Maria Philomena, M.I.C.M. wrote:

    Please feel free to comment on these compositions, but don’t use the students’ names if you know them. Thank you!

    Posted 06 Mar 2009 at 3:01 pm
  2. NICOLE wrote:

    Loved each one, Sister Teacher, and Essay #5 is my favorite!

    Posted 24 Apr 2009 at 5:35 pm

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